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Your whole flow, critiqued. With the fixes written.

The free crit tells you where one page loses people. Loop Crit follows them through the whole path, from landing to signup, and hands back a ranked fix list with the copy and code already drafted. $49, back in 48 hours.

What you get

Fixes, not just findings.

01

Up to five screens, read as one flow.

Every page scored on the same seven principles, plus a score for how well each step hands off to the next. Most drop-off happens between pages, not on them.

02

A fix list ranked by effort and impact.

Every finding sorted into fix this week, next sprint, or later, so you start with the cheap wins that matter most.

03

Annotated screenshots.

Desktop and mobile, with numbered callouts tied to each finding. Forward them to your team as-is.

04

Fixes, not just findings.

Rewritten CTA labels and headlines, exact contrast values, the HTML and CSS changes. Ready to paste.

05

An agent-ready fix file.

Hand fixes.md to Cursor, Claude Code, Codex, or any AI coding tool, or work through it by hand.

06

One round of follow-up questions.

If a finding isn't clear, ask. We'll answer in writing.

Example

We ran one on Lovable.

Homepage → pricing → sign-up, four screens read as one flow. Each screen holds up fine on its own. The trouble is in the hand-offs. Flow score: 3/5 on desktop, 2/5 on mobile.

Lovable pricing page with numbered callouts 4 to 7
04 · HIGH · FIX THIS WEEK

Pro ($25) and Business ($50) both default to "100 monthly credits." "What is a credit?" only comes up in the FAQ further down. Fix: one-line differentiator under each price, plus a credit hint that links to the answer.

Lovable sign-up page with numbered callouts 11 and 12
12 · HIGH · NEXT SPRINT

The plan you picked doesn't follow you. "Get started" goes to a plain /signup. Fix: pass ?plan=pro and show "Creating your account for Pro · $25/mo · change."

Lovable log-in page with numbered callouts 8 to 10
11 · MEDIUM · FIX THIS WEEK

Sign-up offers "Continue with SSO" and log in doesn't, so returning SSO users get a note instead of a button. Fix: the same four options on both screens.

Lovable sign-up page on desktop with callouts
DESKTOP · 1440px
Lovable sign-up page on mobile, cookie banner covering the terms line
MOBILE · 390px
18 · HIGH · FIX THIS WEEK

Same screen, different problem.

On desktop the cookie card sits off to the side. On a phone it covers about 20% of the screen and hides the "By signing up, you agree to our Terms" line, so it's covered right at the consent point. The mobile capture also had no SSO button. Fix: a two-line banner, padding under the form while it's open, and the same sign-in options at every width.

Mobile flow score: 2/5.

Unsolicited sample. Not affiliated with or endorsed by Lovable. Public pages only, captured Oct 13, 2026 at desktop and mobile widths. The full sample has 17 findings, a scorecard, and a fixes.md ready for Cursor, Claude Code, Codex, or any AI coding tool.

Fit

Who it's for.

It's for you if

  • You know one page isn't the whole story.
  • You have a live signup, checkout, or onboarding flow that should convert better.
  • You ship fast (maybe with AI) and want a specific list you can act on this week.

It isn't if

  • You want a redesign or new visual concepts. That's a different engagement.
  • The flow isn't built yet, or sits behind a login you can't share a test account for.
  • You want a rubber stamp.

Guarantee

If the report doesn't give you at least three fixes you'd actually ship, reply within 14 days and we'll refund you in full.

You keep the report. A critique you can argue with is doing its job, and so is one you can get your money back on.

FAQ

Questions.

How is this different from the free crit?

The free crit is one page, scored and prioritized. Loop Crit covers up to five screens as a single flow, adds effort/impact ranking and annotated screenshots, and writes the actual copy and code fixes.

Who does the critique?

Agents inside Loop OS capture your pages and run the seven-principle crit. Luis reviews every report before it goes out. Agents do the legwork and a human makes the calls.

What do I need to send?

The URLs in order (or a starting URL and the steps), who the page is for, and what you want people to do. If a step is behind a login, a throwaway test account.

What if it's not useful?

You get your money back: if the report doesn't give you at least three fixes you'd actually ship, reply within 14 days for a full refund.

Can you implement the fixes?

Not as part of Loop Crit. If you want help, book a working session and we'll prioritize and plan the fixes together.

What's your turnaround, really?

48 business hours from when we get your intake. If we miss it, we'll tell you why.

One flow. Ranked fixes. $49.

Pay, send your URLs, and get the report back in 48 hours.